The Dare

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By Ivorwen

A little something from my teen years.

The Dare

The game was getting old,
And the night was growing cold.
How nice another coat would be.
My friend, she did agree.
Especially with a guy inside,
With that I definitely could abide.

Then her brother came near.
The choice of coats was clear.
"I dare you," she whispered to me,
"Do it, so we can see."
The results were obvious with this guy,
But no, I was too shy.

The dare, I wanted to take;
Then no excuse I'd have to make,
To touch this guy.
But come near, and away he's fly.
Just imagining the smile I could put on his face,
Made me want to invade his space.

Bright blue eyes and short blond hair,
Men as honest as him are rare.
So mature, though only in his teens,
And you haven't seen nothing, 'till you've seen those Wrangler jeans.
His smell is pure country, wild and free.
His name is Roland Lee.

"Alright," I finally decided,
And up to him I strided.
Saying, "I'm cold," I unzipped his coat.
"Me too," he said, with a suspicious note.
I stepped inside, watching his eyes.
They showed such great surprise.

With a smile on his face, back he flew;
His confusion showing through.
The laughter of friends rang out,
And I turned with a shout --
"I can't believe I did this."
Whole time, 'twas grinning at his sis!

-- Crystal Dee, 1995

Ivorwen, 2009.

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Comments

Vladimir Uhri profile image

Vladimir Uhri Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

Very nice, thanks.

ralwus 2 years ago

Very cute of you. Sneaky cheeky gal you. Woo-hoo

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cindyvine Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

sweet poem lol

Joy At Home profile image

Joy At Home Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Thanks for the laugh. :D

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Ivorwen Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank ya'll!

MarkHall profile image

MarkHall 2 years ago

very good :)

metaphysician profile image

metaphysician 2 years ago

Cheer things up! Thanks,

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Pearldiver 2 years ago

Hi Ivorwen, nice work; both in words and in action. I had a dare like this last year, with someone from the other side of the world... I will hub it soon. Thanks for letting me in.

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Ivorwen Hub Author 2 years ago

I look forward to reading it, Pearldiver!

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